Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Monday, September 29th- I'm Weirded Out...

As soon as I arrived I felt that something was out of place. I walked into that blue box and yelled "Doctor, where are you?" There was no response. I began to search this box that is bigger on the inside. With no luck I kept yelling for my dearest Doctor, but he never replied. I stepped out of the Tardis and fell to the firey depths of the universe.

Oh wait.. I was dreaming.

4 comments:

  1. Oh wow! I liked the ending it was hilarious!
    I also like Doctor Who, great show.

    if only you made it longer, I would love to read more!

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  2. I like the reference to the TV show Doctor Who, that was a very nice touch. However, if you maybe wrote more on this story and explained things more vividly such as how the person felt or more of what they had seen and heard, then it would make the story a lot better and more detailed.

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  3. Everyone knows that police boxes can fit only one person, dreams make you think irrationally, so I understand that you think a doctor can fit inside a box with you like that but in reality it is near impossible. Doctors can't operate in such a confined area. Who is that Doctor, I wish you elaborated more. Good dream, 10/10 boxes.

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  4. It was all a dream endings are always the best endings. I just wish you explained who this doctor was, or why he confined his office space into an ordinary telephone booth, I feel that it is impractical for a doctor to see patients in such a space.

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